Tuesday, July 26, 2016

The Art of Eating Spaghetti


1.                  Baker’s choice of audience was mainly his high school teacher, Mr. Fleagle. His teacher was a significant influence in his life, especially in motivating him to pursue his dream of becoming a writer. At the beginning of the essay, Baker expressed his desire to write, but was discouraged by Mr. Fleagle style of teaching. Nevertheless, this discouragement became something positive as Mr. Fleagle later influenced him to write an excellent essay. His teacher was impressed with his performance on the essay, and Baker was ultimately pleased with his teacher.

2.                  “The notion of becoming a writer had flickered off and on in my head since the Belleville days, but it wasn’t until third year in high school that the possibility took hold”. This statement is the highlight and summary of the essay. It explains the foundation of his vision to become a writer, and also when that vision became manifest in his life.

3.                  Baker started the essay by introducing himself with a brief synopsis of his desire to write. He humbly shared his challenges, which explains that though he had the desire to become a writer, it was not an easy journey to proclaim that. It took him being enrolled in Mr. Fleagle’s class, before he could get the opportunity to actually experience a glimpse of his dream and aspiration. Based on these facts, I firmly infer that Baker’s overall purpose in this essay is to use his autobiography as a way to inform, and encourage his readers. His transparency and willingness to share his challenges prove that one does not become somebody in a day. Essentially, it takes determination, perseverance, and hard work for one to achieve his or her dreams and aspirations.


4.                  Baker’s tone aligns and affirms his purpose. He was more informal in his tone. His statement “the idea of prim Mr. Fleagle plucking his nipple from boneless gums was too much for the class” is rather informal than formal. It seemed more for an entertainment, than for educational or other formal purposes. 



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